Post by Verti :3 on Aug 4, 2013 21:01:54 GMT
RAVENCLAW
The prefix 'Raven' comes from Ravenclaw's dark pelt. Raven is another word for dark or black. The suffix 'Claw' is due to his appearance trait. His claws are long and always sharpened to perfection. {If possible}, I would want him to have a genetic defect that doesn't allow him to retract his claws all the way. If not, this will be ruled out.
DESCRIPTION
For Ravenclaw's general appearance, could we use the metaphor, "As black as the night sky?" If we can, that is exactly correct. As dark as charcoal, black surrounds Ravenclaw's pelt like liquid tar. No other form of color tries to make way on his pelt, and yet even his whiskers are as black as him. His general appearance or 'build' can be described as very stocky with widened shoulders, and thick muscle covers his whole body. Not once part of him is deprived from thick bones and increased strength.
Moving onto his face, it lacks emotion and tranquility. As hard as stone, not even a twitch is seen on his face. Besides the occasional snarl or threatening posture he takes, he does not have one ounce of kindness inside his black soul. His eyes are always narrowed in disgust or disappointment from others, and he is a truly frightening creature to see. His eye color is the least of his concern, but they are described as 'burning embers that never dull out'. A reddish-orange in color, they are a perfect match for him and his pelt color. Looking across the way, you can see his ember orbs, glinting at you with interest, ready to snap at you once you make a mistake. Each orb hints malice, aggression, and disgrace he has towards his vile enemies.
Lastly, Ravenclaw's most defined trait are his claws. Long and deadly, they are his ultimate weapon for offensive and defensive battles. Like five finger death punches, his claws are stained a pale red from previous battles. He is seen as a cannibal, but doesn't eat the tainted flesh of his enemies.
Moving onto his face, it lacks emotion and tranquility. As hard as stone, not even a twitch is seen on his face. Besides the occasional snarl or threatening posture he takes, he does not have one ounce of kindness inside his black soul. His eyes are always narrowed in disgust or disappointment from others, and he is a truly frightening creature to see. His eye color is the least of his concern, but they are described as 'burning embers that never dull out'. A reddish-orange in color, they are a perfect match for him and his pelt color. Looking across the way, you can see his ember orbs, glinting at you with interest, ready to snap at you once you make a mistake. Each orb hints malice, aggression, and disgrace he has towards his vile enemies.
Lastly, Ravenclaw's most defined trait are his claws. Long and deadly, they are his ultimate weapon for offensive and defensive battles. Like five finger death punches, his claws are stained a pale red from previous battles. He is seen as a cannibal, but doesn't eat the tainted flesh of his enemies.
PERSONALITY
MALICIOUS/DECEIVING
Ravenclaw's main purpose is to prove others weak and wrong. Being deceiving and malicious makes it almost too easy for the dark warrior to show his enemies who is the best of the best. Being able to make plans that easily fool the enemy into submission, the tom wastes no time in slaying the prey before him. He can be described as the 'Purgeful' cat, killing any cat he thinks is too weak to live, or cannot fend for themselves. He views everyone as weak piggies that would make nothing but a meal to himself. Of course, in his own clan, he strives to teach the apprentices what he knows and to be loyal to the leader at all costs. He is ambitious at points, but doesn't want to overthrow the leader the clan currently has. Ravenclaw kills to unleash the beast he keeps pent up inside himself for long periods of time.
HATEFUL/DISCOURAGING
Ravenclaw hates everyone that isn't in his own clan, and even then all that part isn't true. He will report any cat to the leader that he views as a traitor and weak. Granted nobody has to be perfect, but they have to meet most of his expectations. If they can't, he will only give them one more chance to prove themselves in battle with his enemies, or he will report them to the leader. Killing his own clanmates will get him executed, so permission to do it himself is always the better way to go. The tom also discourages many things in the clan, including play time the kits do when they're young. In his own opinion, it shows that all cats can be something the clan doesn't want, and the more warriors the better.
LOYAL
Despite all the negative traits Ravenclaw has, he is fiercely loyal to Sunclan and his leader. He is well old enough to make his own choices, but he looks up to the leader for the final decision. He would never betray Sunclan, and die for them at the cost of his own life. Loyalty to his clanmates is slightly less, and he doubts everyone in the clan besides the high positions. You need to prove yourself over and over to get Ravenclaw's trust.
Ravenclaw's main purpose is to prove others weak and wrong. Being deceiving and malicious makes it almost too easy for the dark warrior to show his enemies who is the best of the best. Being able to make plans that easily fool the enemy into submission, the tom wastes no time in slaying the prey before him. He can be described as the 'Purgeful' cat, killing any cat he thinks is too weak to live, or cannot fend for themselves. He views everyone as weak piggies that would make nothing but a meal to himself. Of course, in his own clan, he strives to teach the apprentices what he knows and to be loyal to the leader at all costs. He is ambitious at points, but doesn't want to overthrow the leader the clan currently has. Ravenclaw kills to unleash the beast he keeps pent up inside himself for long periods of time.
HATEFUL/DISCOURAGING
Ravenclaw hates everyone that isn't in his own clan, and even then all that part isn't true. He will report any cat to the leader that he views as a traitor and weak. Granted nobody has to be perfect, but they have to meet most of his expectations. If they can't, he will only give them one more chance to prove themselves in battle with his enemies, or he will report them to the leader. Killing his own clanmates will get him executed, so permission to do it himself is always the better way to go. The tom also discourages many things in the clan, including play time the kits do when they're young. In his own opinion, it shows that all cats can be something the clan doesn't want, and the more warriors the better.
LOYAL
Despite all the negative traits Ravenclaw has, he is fiercely loyal to Sunclan and his leader. He is well old enough to make his own choices, but he looks up to the leader for the final decision. He would never betray Sunclan, and die for them at the cost of his own life. Loyalty to his clanmates is slightly less, and he doubts everyone in the clan besides the high positions. You need to prove yourself over and over to get Ravenclaw's trust.
HISTORY
KITTENHOOD
Ravenclaw's history as a kitten didn't add up to much, but it did foreshadow how he would grow up to be how he is today. Born in the beginning of Greenleaf, the black kitten was the third born of his five sibling family. His parents were proud of their genetic work, and his mother cared for him until three moons of age. At this time, some mysterious tom snuck in from the dead of the night and abducted every kitten except himself. As the clan awakened to see what was going on, the intruder vanished. Afterword's, the cunning cat left clues to where he took each of Ravenclaw's siblings. His parents desperately tried to follow the clues, but ended up finding their son or daughter as corpses instead of live cats. The intruder fooled them into their ultimate mistake, and both were severely injured before Sunclan aided to fight back. Now both of his parents lay an elderly cripple.
APPRENTICESHIP
Ravenclaw after his ordeal had been scarred for life, demanding to find the mysterious cat who killed his siblings and crippled his parents. Though he never paid much attention to family, he swore a promise to find and execute the cat that did it. Along the way, he was trained by some of the most experienced and loyal warriors Sunclan had, switching over to different ones to learn different skills assets he needed to be apart of the clan. His training went by very fast, and by the time he reached eight moons of age, he already knew all the basics to fighting, and was learning more advanced moves that were difficult to portray upon.
By the time he finished his training, the leader happily gave him his name Ravenclaw, impressed by his fighting techniques and the way he used his claws. Ravenclaw has participated in many battles, but none were very major ones. Most of the scars and blood he carried were from countless amounts of intruders and challengers he'd face in the territory. But nonetheless, he earned his rank in the clan.
WARRIORSHIP
He is a very experienced warrior, and quite young still. Most say he learned so quickly to avenge his siblings deaths, and to make the intruder pay. Others say he was born to fight. Whatever be the case, Ravenclaw plans to make himself known for generations to come. You don't need to be a high position to have fame. It just matters how much of an impact he has on his clan, and at the right time. Ravenclaw flourishes in Sunclan, despite being half starved from prey. He keeps himself fit by regularly hunting for queens and kittens, and runs throughout the territory numerous times a day.
Ravenclaw's history as a kitten didn't add up to much, but it did foreshadow how he would grow up to be how he is today. Born in the beginning of Greenleaf, the black kitten was the third born of his five sibling family. His parents were proud of their genetic work, and his mother cared for him until three moons of age. At this time, some mysterious tom snuck in from the dead of the night and abducted every kitten except himself. As the clan awakened to see what was going on, the intruder vanished. Afterword's, the cunning cat left clues to where he took each of Ravenclaw's siblings. His parents desperately tried to follow the clues, but ended up finding their son or daughter as corpses instead of live cats. The intruder fooled them into their ultimate mistake, and both were severely injured before Sunclan aided to fight back. Now both of his parents lay an elderly cripple.
APPRENTICESHIP
Ravenclaw after his ordeal had been scarred for life, demanding to find the mysterious cat who killed his siblings and crippled his parents. Though he never paid much attention to family, he swore a promise to find and execute the cat that did it. Along the way, he was trained by some of the most experienced and loyal warriors Sunclan had, switching over to different ones to learn different skills assets he needed to be apart of the clan. His training went by very fast, and by the time he reached eight moons of age, he already knew all the basics to fighting, and was learning more advanced moves that were difficult to portray upon.
By the time he finished his training, the leader happily gave him his name Ravenclaw, impressed by his fighting techniques and the way he used his claws. Ravenclaw has participated in many battles, but none were very major ones. Most of the scars and blood he carried were from countless amounts of intruders and challengers he'd face in the territory. But nonetheless, he earned his rank in the clan.
WARRIORSHIP
He is a very experienced warrior, and quite young still. Most say he learned so quickly to avenge his siblings deaths, and to make the intruder pay. Others say he was born to fight. Whatever be the case, Ravenclaw plans to make himself known for generations to come. You don't need to be a high position to have fame. It just matters how much of an impact he has on his clan, and at the right time. Ravenclaw flourishes in Sunclan, despite being half starved from prey. He keeps himself fit by regularly hunting for queens and kittens, and runs throughout the territory numerous times a day.
OTHER
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Personal Text: "Ever danced with the Devil by the pale moonlight?"
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Other Characters: N/A.
Purchased: N/A.
Stock: Here c:
Avatar: I hope this works. c:
Personal Text: "Ever danced with the Devil by the pale moonlight?"
Other: None.
